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Call me antfucker
Give me a name
I cannot beat the system
I cannot beat the pain

All made to wallow
All made to wander
Give me a reason
I’ll give it a shot

Nothing to burn
Everything to break
Keep coming with those actions
I will pay the price of fake

Keep me close
While I keep you distant
Keep in contact
While I repulse the line

Like the wind
who is my lover
Like the storm
that is my name

A promise
is always a cover
Things waiting
to go insane

I’ll give you a reason
If you take the shot
I’m here gun loaded
Play like a god

Force it and handle it
It’s a well damn aim
Yes this is no childplay
It’s a goddamn adult game

So call me antfucker
Promise me a lie
All I can say now is that still
I am not ready
to die
:iconkeizie:
The characters inside my mindmovie keep stabbing them monologues at me. ._.

About ''Antfucker'' -

In Dutch a mierenneuker is literally translated in English an ''antfucker'', which basically means a nitpicker.
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:iconkill3dinside4u:
I love it! I can definitely find myself in this at some points. The anger, determination, rebelliousness that it sounds like were used to create this really paid off- amazing job!
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:iconhummuss:
ah who is this nitpicker? you? this is bloody brilliant Pie. mwah :heart:
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:iconmaxlake2:
*maxlake2 Jan 30, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
I love learning new words - in Dutch AND English!
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R
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:iconcrimson-fatality:
You have a very different writing style and pattern of words.
I like it a lot. Very strong piece. =3
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:iconradiopooh:
I really really love that ..
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:iconquanitz:
~quanitz Jan 23, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
I agree with lightdrafter; this seems a little apocalyptic and melancolic. Which reminds me of the poems I myself wrote when I was depressed some years ago.

Is everything OK?
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:iconnoam-b:
I think this is my favorite lines- "Nothing to burn
Everything to break
Keep coming with those actions
I will pay the price of fake".

Really good.
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:iconcloss:
wowWOW WOW!!! THATS SUPERB!:clap:
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:iconlightdrafter:
keizie... you're weird. In one moment you seems to by happy and all right... and ...next second you suffer... what's this about? Don't give up! Make others give up!
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